Break time’s over …
… on to editing …
Chapter 1, scene 1 …
… a steam locomotive pulling a line of rickety-rackety carriages slowly winds through a long mountain pass. It’s Autumn, a beautiful sunny day, but there’s a chill, a hint of snow in the air …
I do believe it’s time for afternoon tea though
Widdershins Worlds 
This made me smile!
I always like to pretend I am editing someone else’s work, makes it more challenging somehow. (helps if you have a terrible memory!)
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I get to parts of this story and go, “Damn, that’s good!” 😀
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I have had a few of these golden moments too…
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😀
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🙂
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Never, never, never edit on a dark and stormy night, for on just such knights the Muse eats Grandma, shoots, and leaves.
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Well placed Oxford comma. 🙂
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